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woooo interesting :)
december 1st~ okie i'll keep that in mind ^___^
...............*now in search for a suitable scan*

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uhm....my latest YA wall seems to be disappeared '_'a
it says it has been deleted or doesn't exist x_x

here's the wall .. i've posted this over at AP too.

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Happy B-day ^______________^
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ganbatte euna!~ hehhhehheeee

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include more colors :) not just yellow!~
maybe include an abstract scenery in the bg...those sihlouette one...just a fade one. since she's holding a floatie....a beach scene!~ ^___^
i dunno...i'm leaning toward a scenic bg here. ^___^
awaits ur wall. :)

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uhm..the scan is too blurry!~
and what's the text doing on the left side?...It doesn't match with the scan. >_< try to use a smooth or fancier font in here.
and i think keeping the whole wall purple is unique..but not quite working here.
click here for fonts
click here for brushes

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the 2nd one looks good. the flames give more impact and correspond to ur title "burning gundam"/"burning desire".
but i like the gundam to be a bit smaller..so the flame can hv some attention too :)
keep it up!~
since u said u don't wanna change the font....=_+ but i think it stands out too much.

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great concept. but the elements are sorta all over the place.
i would like the female to be bigger..so she'll be the main focus.
the background is well done.
the font stands out a bit too much. try to incoporate them so they are part of the picture too. download some better fonts that will match ur theme. :)
nonetheless, this looks pretty good.
keep it up!~

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it looks great~~~ keep going!

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oh i usually use any wallpapers that i think it looks nice. :D
and when i made a wall..i use it for a couple of days to see if there's any flaws in it...and then switch back to whatever i feel i want to use at that moment. ^_^

*for now, i'm using Cloudnine's "The light before we land"

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wow great job.
i can imagine the pretty scenes as i'm reading the poems.
yay for winter, becoz snow is pretty.... ^^ but not so much when u hv to shovel the snow off ur driveway...=_=
anyways..hehe....i like the two poems...so keep them coming!~ :D

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Quote by kuroimisaahahahahaa

*is in a mental state of shock*

I'm stoned. >.<

*hands out cookies to everyone*

me same :nya: omgx100...i can't believe it...

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Quote by kuroimisa;___;
*shivers in a dark alley, quietly lurking like a mushroom, waiting for the final results to come out*

hahah :x

me too.....can't wait for the results!~ ;)

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wa.....fruba is now up to chapter 118...i can't imagine how the sequel will turn out....
agree with xhidst...there's so many flashbacks and side stories....it's gonna be complicated of how the sequel will follow the plot....
but a sequel will definitely be nice ... cuz i luvvvvv fruba ^_^

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i can't wait to see how all the walls look like.... >_<
they must all look super super amazing....
and i must say W.A.R. was fun...
and a big thx to flyindreams for all her effort in organizing it. *hug*

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wow well done!~....
u can really see the difference between the version 1 extraction and the last one :)
i agree with Devildude...plan a concept before you start walling ^_^

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the scan looks blurry....and i don't like people blowing the image up and stuck it to the bg....cuz i think it's meaningless >_<
so bg is supposed to be a dream....i see what u're trying to do....
careful with perspective..cuz she doesn't really look like walking in a forest.
You can use a stock photo to aid you in creating a scenic background. So you will have an idea of how should the perspective be. try this site: http://www.sxc.hu/
the color choices are good.
the outglow of her seems a bit too sharp....try to soften it up a bit
nonetheless, it looks pretty good....keep it up!~

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pretty good...but it lacks a theme...or a direction.....
it's just a scan..with a plain background...
i know the effect looks nice...but try to create a bg that compliments the scan. mix the bg and scan into one whole picture ^_^
extraction looks good...
keep it up :)

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the idea of having the doll in green laying her head into the other doll's lap is great.
uhm...as for the background...if you're trying to create a spooky atmosphere....a scenic bg would be more appropriate...cuz i think an abstract bg would be quite hard to achieve that....well....that's in my opinion...lol
so..what kinda of bg would fit?....here are some thoughts that i came up with
the blue doll sitting on a chair...her back facing the window...and the villain u've mention, Suigintou?...outside, peeping at them....wooo =_=
so i'd make them smaller...since they are taking up most of the wall's space.
good luck to u in the contest ^^

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waa cool bg...i kinda like the black version better....I think it looks more dramatic...adds a bit of impact to the title...14 days for conspiracy...
and for the red version, i agree with calisqo...the scan needs some work...the line looks jagged...
but overall, it looks great!~ keep it up ne!~

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uhm.....u just slapped a scan on top of a screen cap. that's it.
so try not to use screen cap as bg =_= create ur own.
look @ some photoshop tutorial and pick up a few skills and try again.
photoshop tutorials can be easliy found in goggles/yahoo search :)
keep it up!~

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The cammy one looks so plain..u just slapped two images of her on a black bg and her name....nothing else
the extraction needs work. and put more thought into the background.

The 2nd one looks pretty cool. the bg effect looks interesting...but i can't really see the image....
u should make it stands out a bit more >_< and download some better fonts!~
go here: http://www.1001fonts.com/

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it's too red, too intense...and why only one color? *_*
the image is too blurry, probably due to the quality of the scan and the texture u've added. So i think the texture is not necessary here.
Try to put more effort in composition for the bg...=_= i know u're going for abstract here..but it looks too plain...:P
nice try for 1st attempt tho :) keep it up!~

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woo nice....but i don't like the red on the right hand side, it's tooo red...
it'll be cooler if u can make some techy bg...like a battleground or something...
but nonetheless, it looks pretty good ^^

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wow cool composition

the light shading of the scan looks off...a bit too dark
the window looks oversized. The moon looks unnecessary.
uhm..i agree with Kai81220..the stars look very fake...
but overall, i like the composition and see ur effort in it...
you just need to work on it a bit more ^_^ keep it up!~

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